 Superkawaiifreak 2009-11-12 . chapter 4Wonderful |
 Superkawaiifreak 2009-11-12 . chapter 3Ohh gosh, this is entertaining. :) |
 Superkawaiifreak 2009-11-12 . chapter 1How fucking funny!:D |
 myne 2009-11-11 . chapter 17 geez my kakashi got 99% of ANBU babes nyahaha |
 myne 2009-11-10 . chapter 12 tenten and shikamaru's scene were the best, i burst out laughing |
 myne 2009-11-10 . chapter 8 way to col so funny, can't belive i was laughing while reading this, it's awesome |
 CoralianBoy 2009-11-09 . chapter 33absolutly fantastic story. i loved it |
 lianne 2009-11-08 . chapter 7 ohmygod. I almost died laughing. XD It's hilarious! |
 Dancing Roses and Sunny Rain 2009-11-06 . chapter 2once again, oh my effing god! I was laughing so hard that i startd choking!! |
 Dancing Roses and Sunny Rain 2009-11-06 . chapter 1Oh my effing god this is so funny! |
 JRol 2009-11-06 . chapter 33OK, it started from browsing through DeviantArt, where I found your Naruto/Bleach crossover comic. One thing led to another... I have to say, this is the funniest Naruto fanfic I have ever read. (The fact that it is also the first Naruto fanfic I have ever read is beside the point.)
-JRol |
 Gaara's cherry 2009-11-06 . chapter 33LOL
GREAT, awesome job!~ I laughed so much, I think I woke up everyone in the house. XD Keep writing~ ^_^ |
 Rosie2110 2009-11-06 . chapter 1 This story was funny from the very beginning and I found it hard to stop reading to continue with daily functions. I suggested it to my sister, who loves it too, and I can't really pick at a point and say "That's the best" because everything was awesome! Some of the ideas were original, and very humorous, and I loved how things were put together and pretty easy to understand what was going on.
The only improvement advice I could give you is the way you space out the different parts, because sometimes I'll see the dots, think I'm going to another area, but only end up finding it was an awkward silence or something. |
 Maiden Marmalade 2009-10-31 . chapter 30OMG! Hinata had a fox! I can't even write a proper review because I'm still laughing from the shock of this ending. The way you wrote the story all 3 endings could have worked, which was genius.
This is definitely one of the top 3 humorous Naruto stories. Its hilarious. |
 Maiden Marmalade 2009-10-31 . chapter 1LOL I loved Asuma's way the best. He would do something like that.
Great chapter! I look forward to the next. |