Do you plan on continuing this?

Well, now that school is out I hope we'll be seeing more of this.

Do you plan on contuinuing this?

Very good!
I want more!

Just some adviceless encouragement. This story is very entertaining. Definitely one of the best size-challenged Danny fics out there. I look forward to any and all updates. :)

Cheers!
HiddenAuthor

HHAHAHHAHAHHAH. Danny as a 4 year old. how cute. I hope you finsh this soon.

I thought that this was pretty good. Besides the fact that it was a bit slow at times, I thought this was well done! I give you my honorary virtual cookie, for a fanfic well done.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Great story so far!

This is getting good, love. :)

A few things I caught, though...

((“Mom and Dad should be until at least ten,” Jazz said, walking into the kitchen, only to come face-to-face with her dad.))

I presume there should be a "gone" in there somewhere.

You also need to clear up how Danny got to the Speeder. You had him collapsing in Jazz's arms but then Sam and Tucker were laying him on the seat with no obvious transfer.

Did a good job of showing how draining Danny's abilities are now. I hope you can update soon.

Great story thus far! Update soon, when there's adequate time!

Have a nice day,
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Bum bum bum! 4 year old Danny has to fight with Ember! GASP! lol update soon!

love the chapter. as for school, i know what you mean. i may not be in college (yet) but my sister's going to college this year and she's not happy about the amount of work she's going to be getting...as for me, 9th grade is sure to be a nightmare. update whenever you can.

AWESOME CHAPTER! UPDATE SOON!

Don't apologize for taking time with the story. It's not dragging at all. One thing that turns me off about much fanfic is that there's little or no "building of the world" and setting up the plot. It's like good cooking...if you rush it too much, you'll spoil it. ;)

Just a little thing for future reference (I'm a stickler for medical details). What you seem to be describing is not a "growth disorder". Rather it is a growth delay. This is a normal variant for some people and tends to run in families. And, although growing pains can be severe and annoying, they don't generally last for more than a few minutes at a time.

Can't wait for the next installment.

cool,I think this is one of the best 'Danny is now younger' stories I have read but just a tip.
instead of
"What happened?" asked Jazz
it could be more like
"What happened?" Jazz asked as she looked at Danny,thinking about how that could of happened.
Just a tip,you don't have to use it.