Very cute ending. Please update soon.

It's such a warm story:) It's nicely written and I truly enjoy reading it

Great chapter.

Welcome back, mate.

Good to see you writing again, and even better to see your songwriting skills are still top-notch.

Let's chat sometime,

-Avof

You don't suck. And you're not an asshole :)

Sure, your writing is not God's gift to earth, but neither is mine. Despite all that, I still like what I've read so far. Also, amen to your author's note. Overall, the quality of writing in this fandom is depressing, to be honest. Few are the stories that are worthwhile. That's why I created my own collection on a website. Sometimes I get tired of fishing for a good story, so it's best to have it in one place.

This was really sweet in a way. I like the lyrics of your song as well...heh it reminds me of another friend of mine who writes songs.

Please keep going.

How sweet!

Cute.

This is pretty cute! NaruHina rules!

I really enjoyed this, to the very end. I'm still a bit hazy on what exactly went on between them, but it's nice to to be a little open-ended, too. I like how it's not directly romantic, but it does stay sweet.

i hope you can continue... but i doubt it..

aw so cute i loved that and that song the end keep on writing wonderful:)

Very cute and sweet, well done.