Great entertaining Shorts you have here

I love it! ^-^

aw, that's so cute ^^

Updates! *Cheers*

I had a bit of trouble picturing where he was at the start, but was readily distracted by the events anyway ^Q^

As usual, good job :)

Thanks for the chapter,

-Iris.D

p.s. I don't think the italic'd bit came out very well on the online version

ahaha this is hilarious!! its a good combination of stories.. update soon?? :D

Excellent idea.

cdk

I love this pairing. Kakashi/Iruka are so over done.

Good work!

~squeak~

~gasp~

~deep breath~

OMIGAWDOMIGAWDOMIGAWD THAT WAS TOO CUTE SQUEE-EE-EE-EE-EE!!

What is it about Genma/Taisei interaction that causes an otherwise sane person to shriek and bounce around like an idiot? ^_^;

loving it, loving it. but have to agree w/genma re: coffee jelly, gack.

Cutie-pie...

Ew...

*giggle* Coffee jelly... I like Genma's innuendos. XD

Cute. ^^ Love Genma and Taisei's brother relationship. ^^

Not really a well rounded critique, but I thought you were having Raido eat Marmite. Coffee jelly eh? Does it really exist?
I like these shorts, though I may have overindulged by reading them all at once.