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| lin 09 2007-10-05 ch 1,  | abusemy gosh this is so sad. it sorta reminds me of myself |
| DailyProphetEditor 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abusevery good. |
| JadeAshes 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseIt was so tender there at the end. I'm a sucker for things like that. Is Petunia really the younger sister? I'm trying to remember the books, but I do not recall any of them ever mentioning which Evans sister was the elder. JA |
| TheBoltShapedScar 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseOh... I could feel the tears burn behind my eyes through the entire reading. Very beautiful. I think you explained Petunia's feelings perfectly! It could very easily be why she 'hates' her sister. |
| BLUEEEyyy 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseRealistic. Real. Amazing. |
| Kat and Kit 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseOh, god... I love this story! |
| Taeniaea 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI love Story!! |
| Tez 2006-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI enjoyed that. I never thought about Petunia like that or what she would feel looking at her sister's grave. A novel idea. Well written as usual. Well done. |
| elisebanana 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abusethat was really good- you did an awesome job of showing how Petunia felt. i really liked it! |
| Munku-JGSPTV 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abuseAw.. A very nice insight into Petunia.. My favourite bit was the paragraph of 'A laugh escapes her'. The structure was really good too. |
| sashp 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good, like all of your other stories I've read. I loved the whole idea behind it and all. Just one thing, and I don't want to offend or anything, but its my OCDlike ticks that are bothering me. A quote : "Wedding bells, her sister had been there with her husband. Her husband was beautiful, of course. Even on her wedding day, she couldn’t shine the brightest; her sister had to out-do her. She was pregnant and everyone had told her she was glowing. Their parents had been thrilled – their first grand child." Dudley's older than Harry though. I know its artistic license and all that, but it was bothering me and I had to get it off my chest. Sorry :/ Unless I've read it wrong and now have made a completely ** out of myself and its very good. It is. |
| Mangacat201 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseWow.. I'm impressed! This is a whole new perspective to the story and I like it!! so, um.. how did you DO that?? Cat |
| Aseret Kitsune 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant fic. I love the details and flow of this piece. Great job of getting into Petunia's mind. Nicely done. Hope you won't mind me adding this to my C2. |
| yaukira 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseoh. i dont know what to say. so pretty and real, but so sad.. |
| jka1 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abusethis was a really bittersweet story i liked it well done ^-^ |