I just read this, and I loved it! You're really good at writing Sweep!

Wow, are you sure you're not a real author? This story is really good. You should try writing a novel or maybe a series like Stephenie Meyer. I wish I could have your imagination to see what happens next.

And so far, you're the only own I've seen who writes chapter names which is cool.

Meeting the parents!

Omg Cal is carzing!! That was so gross..LOL

Sexual Tension alright... lol I liked it, they are still soulmates I think.

Oh shiz-nitz. Busted!!

Yay he remembers! But what?

Ouch. Wow lots of anger there. This is good, but I can't think of anything else to say.

I know why she's thinking about Hunter!! lol awesome story so far! :)

Morgan so planted the seed. And omg Hunter is so falling head over heels, that was cute when he hit his head.

I just love a bit of jealousy in guys. It's cute. Hardly wait till the first day of work.

Wow it's just deja vu having Hunter being a bro to Mary-K and having the friends Morgan would've had. Hee hee he went up to them, aww ATTRACTION! :)

Very interesting "What If" story. I'm very intrigued, b/c it's so backwards and different from the original story. My fave word so far is "Smart Arse". I get called the american way sometimes :)

Hm... I wonder why she can't say those 3 words back? Hopefully I'll find out.

it was good

lol. LOVE THIS BOOK. I can't wait to see what happens next. WHY BECK WHY?! lol.