OMG! this is the best fanfic i have read!
But there are other chpts right?
its like quite a long time and i haven seen any updates...
anws keep up the good work!! =)

Arfsghjklgh!
This story's seriously got me hooked! I like it how you give all characters some spotlight, and how Artemis isn't always in the center of the happenings... and as a Foaly-fangirl, I love it how you wrote so he actually gets to be into the whole adventure... even though I'm sure he'd think otherwise XD Ah... and I was giggling with glee at chapter two. You know it's good when you get that awkward, embarrassed feeling for the misfortunate character XD

Yaya. I'm subscribing. So... UPDATE. >8| *stares at you 'til you update*

omg you rock! i really cant wait for the next chapter!
this story is even better than the original artemis fowl by eoin colfer!

you need to write more chapters for this story. what are you doing that you havent finished it yet?

This is a brilliant FF! Please, please, please update i am begging you! Don't give up on the story!

This is a truly brilliant story! The only way i can fault this is that some times the words dont read right. Just try reading through what you have written and check the gramma and spelling. Overall a brilliant story and the point i made was only found using my critics eye. Keep up the fab work!

I love this story! Don't stop now! Please keep going. (Hoping you aren't dead)

Wow! This is great! I don't know how you got the idea for this, but I like it. Update soon, please!

hi! i absolute LOVE the story so far. i discovered it on the Orion Awards website, and so far i think it's awesome! keep up the great work! oh, and your grammar is impeccable!
*loj*

yeah! Trouble + Holly forever! congrats for the oroin awards! you so descerved to win it! but YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!

This is definately one of the best stories I've ever read. Your writing style is amazing and you manage to incorporate different elements into the story such as romance, action, humor, etc. PLEASE UPDATE!

OMG! You have to update! Update now! I fell of my chair in anticipation! *falls off chair again to prove it* It is so cool! I cannot describe the coolness in actual words! What is the next level?

Great chapter. Love Mrs. Kelp. Update soon.

I love arty's 'punishment'! But I'd like to point out that it's impossible for Holly to pick up the daughter. She must be at least 500 lbs.! Holly is like 85 lbs.! but i still love the story! it would be awesome if he actually did go in the game! that would be so hilarious! :D

BRILLIANT!!
humor, action, a quick sprinkle of hints of romance.
truly a tasty creation of a story. seriously.
good job describing things; chapters are nice and long.
This is truly a story to my liking.
Keep up the good work.