Confusing.

It may be just "fluff" but its fun fluff - the kind you can put on s'mores!

Booth got shot in the butt! :) that should have been an excuse to take off his pants in front of her! lol

great start! please keep writimg, i want to know what happens. may i make a suggestion for the title? here it is -

What Are Friends For?...Right?

Love it!

like the first chap keep it coming

Good beginning. A little more depth (background, scenery, description of spaces/dress/atmosphere sort of stuff) and it would be great. Keep going.