Wow. Holy crap. This is pretty much genius. You are a dang good author!

Brilliant. Very well-written, everyone stays in character, and the lemon is extremely *ahem* engaging. Now, on to the sequels!

Well, better late than never - I finally managed to read the rest of your beautiful story. It's as amazingly well-written as ever, erotic yet tasteful.

Only - chapters 2 and 3 are the same? Or did I miss something?

I'm glad I stumbled over your stories by chance. Your writing skills are fantastic, and I truly like the way you set the mood without rushing anything.

Auron and Lulu are two of my favourite characters, and you do them full justice, keeping them perfectly in character.

I would really love to read the rest of this. Any chance you could send me a link where to find it?

*mischeivious grin* Of course it would prove interesting...

Lulu kissing Auron? Kinda surprising, but not entirely shocking. Auron starting to take things farther? Wow. Once again, I run from erotica, but this story is tempting...

Your stories always make me forget that I'm sitting at a computer. They are that vivid, since I usually have some awareness of my surroundings when I read. If I haven't said this enough, this is simply amazing.

Ahh...A really lovely Auron and Lulu scene. You got Auron-as usual-just right, too...

Vandevere

I loved this story. You write like a literary master. Very awesome. Instant favorite! =D

Aw, this is nice! Very well written. I'm probably not going to read the rest of the lemon, but I'm surprised out how easily you managed to keep these characters in character even when doing pretty uncharacteristic things. Kudos to you!