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| IrishUnicorn 2006-07-26 ch 1,  | abuseThis is the Irina that I know. Not one who would kill her daughter over an obsession. In spite of everthing, Irina truly loved her daughter. You brought that here brilliantly without being overly sentimental. Excellently written. |
| Irina89 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseLovely is the only word that comes right now. Maybe not the best but hey. And I love your sense of humor. |
| myosotis 2006-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's funny that so many people now claim that the lunatic we saw in this joke of a finale was not Irina but another clone I used to think that the finale of season 4, with the clones the zombies, and the stupid redball couldn't have been worse, but JJ, Pinker and co proved me wrong, thanks so much for fixing their crap, and doing the characters justice. Your story was really beautiful, I hope that you write many more Jack and Irina stories ! |
| Christina 2006-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...you're actually a pretty good writer! Your attention to details and particular word choices give an impression of mature and profesional writing...I'm very impressed! |