As far as Beckett stories go, I can honestly say this is the one I have enjoyed the most so far. I love the way you describe the character’s arrongance, disdain and selfishness, and his incapacity to understand, handle or react to care and tenderness. At first, I thought the choice of Gillette as his lover was a bit unlikely, but then it makes perfect sense, and fits into the story very smoothly. I am really amazed at the intensity of the feelings you describe, and can only encourage you to write more about this wonderful pairing- or anyone you have in mind. Bravo.

Very good!

Aww! I loved it!

this was amazing. I'm suprised i haven't seen it over at the LJ group for Beckett yet. ;)