My only problem with this series is that it was written as a series and not as chapters. (I'm lazy, the next button is easier to click.)

I don't think you suck at sequels,and besides these are more like chapters than sequels.

I agree with the other reviewer that a Beta reader would help, but that goes for 90% of the stories on here. You write English better than many native speakers.

This ends well enough that it does not demand another part. (Something some people just do not know how to do.) However, if you have any ideas for another part, I would love to read another sequel.

Keep up the good work!

That's what I tell everyone too. No, I don't listen to BSB, it's my youngest son's cd, really it is. *g* Good potential, but I think you might benefit from a little beta. Nothing awful, just a minor booboo here and there and some places that could have been a tad clearer. Keep writing.