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Aurelia Faiza
5/17/11 . chapter 32
excuse me while i cry my eyes out.

*cries her eyes out*

ok done.

well...

WOW!

amazing, amazing ending! totally unexpected, utterly heartbreaking, not clichéd at all.. just perfect, even if it wasn't the outcome i wanted. congratulations on having the skill to hypnotize a reader so completely, she feels everything julia feels and experiences and genuinely roots for her. i'm not a massive julia fan, but this is incredible; for the last three, maybe four days i've been addicted to this story. possibly the best fanfic i've ever read overall - content, characters, grammar, lucidity, etc.

in a word: brilliant

thank you so much for writing. this story is right up my street; i aspire to write things like this, i really do

congratulations. now go write the next harry potter :)
Aurelia Faiza
5/15/11 . chapter 1
dang. another excellent tekken fanfic that will undoubtedly distract me from revision. ahh well :) :) :)

love it!
ExtraGreenFTW
10/23/10 . chapter 32
awesome plot!
PunchABaby
3/25/10 . chapter 2
Omg excellent story! I could not stop laughing at Xiaoyu's dialogue, god so funny!
howl
3/15/10 . chapter 32
Strangely, I like how you ended this story. Sure, I feel devastated for her, but I also thought something like this would be coming. I guess I am more inclined into the realism hence why I appreciate this fic. I'm glad how in the end she did contribute to jin's uh...survival. I feel like an idiot for asking this but I would like a better insight regarding this chapter from you; why exactly you went in this direction (not that I hate it actually) and some lines I got a little confused at (The "When she thought of her husband" line...I'll be going back some chapters if I missed something, but anyway I wondered "Is this something like a flashback and she's married already or I'm that dumb that I missed something in the past chapters?)

So uh, how to say this...how to contact you...uhm, if you don't mind here's my email: heyaneria @ yahoo . com

I'll be more than grateful to hear your thoughts :D

Anyway, believe me when I say that this is one of the best (if not the best) story I've read about this pairing. Thank you!
blackshooter
1/15/10 . chapter 31
great chapter =)

i love it!

please update soon
tekken lovers
1/14/10 . chapter 1
WHat a great story even i like xiao with jin more

but all what ican say to you that is perfct job and i hope i see more stories

:) by the way come and see my story that will be so nice from you
Joey
12/20/09 . chapter 29
Yay! excellent two chapters there, I breathed with relief to see that 'the last' wasn't the last chapter, and also, when she didn't kill him.

The next chapter sounds awesome. I can't wait!
howlin
12/15/09 . chapter 28
Well...shit. Excuse me but that's all I can say about this chapter. Shit...this got my blood pumping and at the same time cold. God, especially that last line...I don't know if it's good or bad (well...of course it's bad because of what she's about to do but at the same time it's good because the way you delivered it is well...what a punchline).

The chapter title caught me. Good one.

God, what'll happen...
Joey
12/6/09 . chapter 27
Excellent chapter, I'm curious to know what will happen next. However , I have a bad feeling about the title of your next chapter, 'the last'- it sound like you're going to end the story, please don't do that!

The lack of reviews here doesn't mean anything, it just that a lot of readers choose not to review out of various reasons (they might have nothing to say, or they must just be lazy).

A lot of readers (including myself) will be really disappointed if you end the story now, you have built a well planned, interesting plot and one chapter can't tie all of the loose ends, you are keeping us on our toes, please don't let us down.
The Night Lord
12/3/09 . chapter 26
This is one of the best Jin/Julia stories I have come across. I find myself being drawn in by this story and I can't wait for more. Really great stuff. I'm keen to find out what happens next. Keep up the great work :)
Couture.Doll
11/20/09 . chapter 26
Omg! this has been the most intense chapter yet! please update soon! Your chapters are so short! but there alwways worth the wait.

can't wait for the next installement

ah!
Joey
11/19/09 . chapter 26
Awesome story, I liked your descriptions and dialog. Too bad its the only Jin\Julia story that is being updated. But actually, the excellence of this story makes up to that.
Sage Pagan
11/18/09 . chapter 18
So I was bored and randomly decided to read Chapter 18 only, 'cause I wanted to get a general feel for this story. Big LOL at Xiao's Asian accent. "Juria!" I wonder why Asuka was exempt from the accent?

It's cool to see a Julia/Jin (even though I personally favor Jules/Hwoarang). However, I did write Julia/Jin once upon a time, in my story, "Wanderer." Probably why I decided to check this one out. Anyways, just thought I'd comment.
Julia Chang
11/7/09 . chapter 25
When are they going to meet again? This is getting exciting...I suggest you update immediately...lol...Keep up the good work!
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