 Keia101 8/16/06 . chapter 3I certainly enjoy reading your story. Please continue with it:)! |
 karisan 8/15/06 . chapter 2 You're doing great so far, i hope you can update soon.
Take care
Karisan |
 Stars2Heaven 8/8/06 . chapter 1hi cool beggining. I hope Julia is paired with Jin. |
 Enid 8/8/06 . chapter 2 good story I wonder who JUlia will be paired up with/ I hope Ling is ok now |
 RoguefanAM 8/7/06 . chapter 2I LOVE this fic. :)
Your writing doesn’t have any noticeable grammar mistakes, which is refreshing on FF(.)net. Most writer’s just don’t care about grammar anymore…*Sigh*
I really liked how the girls interacted, it felt really realistic, and if Tekken ever does have any the girls interact with each other I expect it to go something like what you came up with.
*Snickers* Poor Asuka, I wonder how she's going to arrange a date for Ling...
My favorite quote from this entire fic:
'Will you be the maid of honor Asuka?' I swear, I feel down laughing on that one. ;)
Anyway, update soon I hope! |
 Keia101 8/7/06 . chapter 2Stuck in a cottage with no hot water or internet connection? That sucks! I like this chapter. Glad you updated. |
 Hassun 7/28/06 . chapter 1Well, it's looking good so far. We'll see what the following chapters bring... |
 karisan 7/26/06 . chapter 1 Continue...i would like to read more, so please update soon. I think you're a great writer...I'm curious to know Xiao's secret. :P
"See" you around and take care
Karisan |
 Keia101 7/25/06 . chapter 1Please continue. This is a very good chapter. |