Oh thats so sweet haha XD
I really like your story, and I loved Marth Samus couple
It´s a very good story, keep like that yeah! XD

this is pretty good.

also on this: (besides Captain Falcon, but he didn’t count because he liked every girl in the mansion, including Nana which was a little creepy come to think of it)all I can say is, WTF!??!?!??!?!?!?11/!?!?1??!?!?!?!

How cute. I just wish there were more MarthxSamus fics out there...Samus and Falcon just aren't pleasing. Anywho, I love the thought of Samus reading a romance novel, as for Marth...what does he do normally? Hmm...

well i liked it, it was really good you played everyone right! its almost like you got inside theyre heads or something!

This was a really nice romance story. Just the tender, light-hearted kind I like. ;)

Well done, crystalicios. I like how you characterized Marth. Overall it flowed smoothly and ended up being very cute. I liked it very much.

Ah thats so cute!
i've never really thought of samus and marth but there cute i guess!

Aw...SAMARTH 4EVAH! I love it, Keep up the great work!

OMG... I'm such a "ghost reader"! XD XP I should have reviewed sooner! Ugghghghhghhghghlfjasdfjsdf.

Sorry. My fingers got ahead of my brain. Well, this was fluffly one shot. If I didn't have to write Chapter Seven of Gardenia and if I took a shower, I would say more...

Erm... cute. I never thought Samus would be the romantic person she was and read Gone With the Wind... Very interesting. Same thing with Marth. LE SHAME ON THEM FOR NOT APPEARING TO BE ROMANTIC! XD XP Why would you want to drink hot chocolate in the bathroom, though? You are strange, my dear friend... strannge I tell to thee!

-BKP

Ah... the ending was kinda cheesy.

You know what? Those two books I've written that have yet to be published... all have cheesy endings. Goodness. I'm still revising them, even after 6 years of being stuck on a disk.

Sad, isn't it?

Heh, nice. Romance isn't usually my cup of tea, but I really liked teh story. I think you portrayed Samus well, but romance novels? Good idea. The storyline was good as a whole, the language was crafted well, and the result was excellent. You have my approvals.

Did any of that make sense? Uh... well... good jobs. Faved.

This was such a great one-shot. I enjoyed it. I'm not a big fan of certain pairings in SSBM, but Marth/Samus pairings are okay. I actually wrote one, and I guess I'm getting more attacted to it. :)

I think this was really cute, and I really loved Marth's personality here. Angels and Demons sounds like a familiar book, but I'm not quite sure...hm...and of course, I have heard of Gone With the Wind.

The ending was really sweet and was my favorite part. I loved it! Yah!

Overall, such a wonderful one-shot and I say great job. Keep up the good work!
*Baby-G*

Well, I'll admit that I thought the ending could have been not as abrupt as it was, but besides that, an excellent one-shot! Very unique idea, and it just shows that ideas can come to us authors at the most random of times. It's happened to me numerous times, yet I have yet to put some ideas of mine on a Word document. But getting back to your one-shot, I liked your descriptions, and both Marth and Samus seemed very in-character, which is always a good thing. Okay, I'm not going to be a critical reviewer, since if I did most of what I would say would be blatantly obvious. So I'll just say great one-shot, and I'll see you on the forumns!

-halomasterchief

Blarg. Another romance I story can read. I usualy hate romance. You are an incredable author.

Whoo... this romance made me want to faint on how romcantic it was. Marth was very smooth and romantic or semi-romantic. Either way Samus was surprised and now they're together. I don't know what to say about you dedicating this to me and Sage. I'm just like...wow. Thanks so much that's really touching. You are like one of the best authoresses I've met on this site. My eyes are getting misty, i have to end this before I cry. Thanks again.

~*~Royal Kenya~*~