I am not a member here yet. But at the same time I have read many of the stories here. I hope this review gets back to you. This is by far one of the best stories I have read here to date. The only thing I noticed that could be beter is at critical moments in the story always check spelling and structure. As the can momentatily paralize a reader at a peak moment in time in the story line. But as I said, this is a great story and one of the first I wanted to review. You had a true talent. Continue on the path. Twisted.

Aww! That was really sweet! Loved it! :) Thanks for the great read! :) (And of course Jack had to get shot in the buttocks ;)...just because.)

Thank you so much. It was great as usual. I hope you write more Jacob/Janet soon because I love it, love it!

I'm just drooling waiting for more! :)

Hee, straight line indeed...Jake can't do things the easy way! :) More soon!

Finally got the chance to catch up on this...more good stuff! :) Happily waiting for more... and loved the "extra special" version on LJ...

too lazy to log-in but wanted to say that I would have never ever paired these characters together. ever. It's a testament to your writing ability that I am totally engrossed in this story and now see them as the perfect couple. I am anxiously awaiting an update so please don't let us wait too long! Again, amazing story, wonderful writing, and thank you for staying true the characters. - Aynn

Again with the leaving it off in a really good place! More soon?

More good stuff! Can't wait to get to the rest!

evil woman and your cliff hangers :P

hm she hates coffee and approves of smoking?

Still loving it and although I love Janet with all my heart, I'm not opposed to a bit of Janet whumping. (hint, hint)

Wow...Jacob on a date...with Janet...I'd draw you a picture of me floored, but I just broke my favourite crayon. Update soon, please!

stop teasing lol :)
wonderful story.

Hee, yes, you are officially evil now.

He, of course Jack would assume Jacob was getting some... :) Thanks for more! :)