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Key Of Destiny-Yow Lin-Crix...
2006-07-31
ch 4,
abuseWould you mind adding me to your story?
I'm Rachel's daughter. I was born with my abilites to morph and create animals.
I have spiked blood-red hair.
I'm a pyro.
I can morph into a dragon.
Sinister Shadow
2006-07-29
ch 3,
abuseBag: Yep! You can't have stories in this format. I'd recommend changing it as soon as possible before some mean jerk reports you. Oh, and you're not allowed to review your own stories either... If you want to reply to an author you have to go on your review board, then go under the reviewer's name and press "Reply". :) I know, too many rules on this site! lol! :P

Your style and plot is good. :) I'm praying for you that your story doesn't get deleted! You've got potential!

To Einstein: DUH. K.A. Applegate created Animorphs. If you expect everyone on this website to be a perfect copy of the author, and have the same writing style, then you're in for some news. This is not Scholastic. And if you're going to accuse people of being "NO KA", firstly learn how to spell.
Einstein
2006-07-27
ch 3,
abuseARE U 7 YRS OLD? Kind of sappy. URE NO KA.
Bag2218
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abuseReally? All my stories have been in that type of format but nobody's ever told me anything about that.
Sinister Shadow
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abuseJust to tell you, you're not allowed to have stories in this format:

Lisa: Oh my God, Ax is dead.

Ben: What do you think happened to him?

It has to be in this format:

"Oh my God, Ax is dead," Lisa said.

"What do you think happened to him?" Ben asked. Etc., etc.

I'm telling you this because script format is prohibited by the site, and if you don't fix it some jerk can report your story and get it deleted from the site. You'll also get a warning. After a certain amount of warnings you'll get your account deleted. Please don't take this lightly. I personally have had stories removed because of script format. And although I won't be the one to report your story for abuse -- I'm not that mean -- I can't guarantee someone else won't.

Good luck!

Sinister Shadow
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