okay by the end I was almost crying. Harry laid quite the guilt trip on Neville by saying what would his parents do. That part kind of made me angry but anyways the rest was good. Poor Neville having to deal with that but then again Harry has to sacrifice himself so yeah can't wait for an update

really really really really good! can't wait for the next chapter

update ASAP! PLEASE I'LL DIE IF YOU DONT! HURRY! YOU SEE THE LITTLE BUTTON THAT SAYS ADD NEW CHAPTER? CLICK IT!

really good so far, only thing you said grand central instead of king's cross

Oh now thats freeking ** stupid! how the hell could he me the freeking horcruxe? i mean its impossible if u accually follow the freeking story. That means he would have to kill himself or send a curse at voldemort and then kill himself for it to work or have someone else kill voldemort

THat can't be, because either one has to kill the other, so He couldn't kill himself. Otherwise good chappie. Like the Lily/Remus bit.

It's really good, I like this story. I hope you update soon!

Great Chapter. Please keep writing. I wonder if you can really change time in apparation. Becasue you are changing place you are like going sideways so going foward and backwords shouldn't be a problem. Good ideas. Really unique and i like it. Never read one like this and its really good becasue its different. Keep writing

Awsome. Incredible story. Love it.

This is a really good start to a story.

Keep up the good work.

so so so good. poor lily. update soon.

hey, cool story. keep up the good work.

it is fantastic

please update a lot

so so so good. this is a really awesome fic.