Bad, BAD SANGO!! Down girl, down. I laughed hard at that line, she always hates it when Miroku does something perverted.

I tried to read the story but the numerous spelling mistakes made it really difficult to read without getting frustrated. The story line is good, I would have like to have read it if I could stand the spelling errors. What happened to spell check? Whatever happened to good old fashioned editing?

Okabe Sayuri(NOT IZUMIKO!): Hn...seems interesting. But, you did make a whole shitload of spelling mistakes: Kana(*=Kanna), Kagpme(*=Kagome), beatiful(*=beautiful), were(*=wear, there are different ways!) acter(*=actor, but should be actress!), minight(*=midnight), tomboyest(*=tomboyish), Kahaku(*=Kohaku, you made this mistake ALOT!), th(*=the), tha(*=the), Inuysha(*=InuYasha), beaitful(*=beautiful), more hotter(*=either hotter, or more hot), has(*=should be as!), Kaga(*=Kouga). Wow! I can't believe I typed all that! Oh, and I noticed you used 'youkai' and 'hanyou' instead of 'demon' and 'half demon'. So, I just thought you'd like to know that in Japanese, 'human' is 'ningen'. Well, other than all the spelling mistakes that just DRILL THEMSELVES UNDER MY SKIN! you have a pretty good story going for you.

this was awesome!

haai I just want to say Wow!
I love it


A.K.A chantal

Oh ** I hate surprises LOL!
Kagura can be such a **.-.-

Yay! Happy endings all around! Huzzah!

omg that was such an awesome story...*tears up* i just can't believe it's over...but it was the best

wat to go nice chapter update soon...wait no i mean sequal up soon please thanx

good story! its so sad that its over 'cry'

*sigh* what a happy ending! *sniffle* so sad to see it end, I really loved the story! I hope you write more stories like that. Just asking! :)
Much love,
bluecrazed

nice update soon i like it alot

Geat story!I love it!And I just started reading!

omg wat happens next omg omg omg :)

OK YAY FOR KAGURA'S DEATH IN THE BEGINNING (or so) OF THE CHAPTER! I don't like her either
THEN BOO FOR THE FACT THAT KAGOME AND KAGURA CAME BACK TO LIFE! I HATE THEM BOTH
This is really good
This is really confusing. SO Yami died in the past. . . . and now she's back bcuz of the spell she cast? I thought she was human (sorry i'm clueless)
YAY FOR RIN! My fave color is silver so i'm glad she has a silver rose or whatever it was.
UPDATE!