nice, just 'cause she's all old on the inside doesn't mean she quite understands these little things, like attraction.

Really sweet.

I think this is the most interesting description of love I've ever read. Plus, the way you describe the recovery of the crew from the tragedies of the BDM is amazing. And all from River's viewpoint, which I love to read.

aw... gorramit but thats CUTE! SHiney shiney piece of fic friend, PLEASE do a follow up or some such! =P

Lovely. I really love the voice you chose for River. Perfect.

I personally find it strange that, despite the amount of not-so-good authors around, I have yet to read a MalRiver fic that fails to impress. Thanks for keeping with tradition. a good fic, and heartily rcommended.

LOVED it! Great job!

lol, that's cute. her learning to differentiate between the love for simon and the love for Mal. very cute. :)

Oh...lovely way to start off writing Firefly fanfics, graywords-girl:)

Immensely enjoyed how you had River think back on her gradual development of understanding about the feelings she was having, looking to Simon and Kaylee to figure it out (though ya gotta shake your head at Simon's attempt to use medicine to kill something that doesn't need ending *wink*). Hope to see more from you in the future:D

BEB

I laughed. I... wanted to cry. And I could almost hear River narrating the whole thing. Luved it. I really, really, really loved it. Insanely cute! It's challenging the Royai, this is!