Well wrtitten. I don't go for the twinscest/ yaoi thing but what you wrote felt genuine.

That was the best HikaruXKaoru fanfic ever! It was very good ^^

KYA~! HOT! HikaKao love! This story is totally hot. Once again, oneshots are just too short, but it was still incredible. Love and thanks! ~Koya

that was SO CUTE!

Ah, I love it!

FANTASTIC.

Absolutely amazing.

gorgeous story, i love the twins!will there be a sequel? amazing story again

Love Love Love Love Love this fic. Kaoru and Hikaru are so adorable together... If the host club really did exist, who could NOT choose them?! This is the cutest, sweetest fic ever!! X3

Whoa...Such a wonderfully written piece...The development of the story and the characters was incredibly nicely done! And you say in your profile that you are not a good writer?! Heck (Excuse the semi-swear word. Gomen.) if you weren't a good writer than I guess I'd be a complete bozo when it comes to writing...;; Oh wait, I AM a complete bozo writer! Meh, whatever.
Oh, and I'll add this story to my favorite stories list. Un! It's so wonderful that I'll have to read it again some time later. Anyways, after all this ranting, all I really wanted to say was 'thank you', for writing this one-shot! :D

Sweet. Nicely developed. It's wonderful, and I'm not sure whether I want to laugh or cry. Great job.

Hi there! It's great I tell you! Really! Hope you'll make another one!

>_< is tremendously impressed! This is a material for envy! *lol*

GREAT! VERY GOOD! I love Kaoru tho' I don't want Hikaru to take him away W a a a a a a h! *sobs*

WAH HIKARU! -sobs for a few more seconds-
Ahem...I love it. Made me cry! (granted, it doesn't take much to do that, but fics like this always make me cry and then go YAY THEY'RE TOGETHER! at the end. ^o^)
BUT! It rocked...I love it. -adds to favorites-

This was good.