Reviews for Rookies and Pros

Reviews For: Rookies and Pros

Dark Angel's Blue Fire 2006-09-28 ch 3,	abusei lvoed the alternative ending it was great loved it!
sarramaks 2006-08-22 ch 3,	abuseI liked both. Personally I always go with endings that are somewhat up in the air as it allows for people to use their own imaginations about what could happen. The second ending was nice and conclusive. I do think you had Don down to a T. I will definitely read more by you!!
sarramaks 2006-08-22 ch 2,	abuseThis was good too. You have a really nice style. You could have elaborated more on Emily, and maybe have had the conversation with Don trying to calm her and digging for information about Danny. I also thought that you did Flack's character extremely well. I loved reading something from his POV, it made the feelings he had for Danny seem real and more than just about lust. Really enjoying it.
sarramaks 2006-08-22 ch 1,	abuseThis was a really good start. It was nice to see Don lusting after Danny and I like the fact that you got his sister involved. The whole 'I'm not gay, Danny's different' was very well done as was the references to dan being a and man. The one thing I would change and this is really minor is the 'ding' from the lift. You're a better writer than to need to use sound effects. I would have included it, but put it in a sentence "The high pitched ringing of the lift reaching it's destination..." yada. Right, reading on now.
valm.csi 2006-08-22 ch 3,	abuseJe trouve que cette fin alternative est très drôle. J'adore lire les pensées de Flack!! J'aime énormément la première fin aussi, et franchement, je peux pas vraiment te dire laquelle je préfère... J'hésite trop! J'aime tout ce que tu écris ;-) Continue comme ça, c'est formidable!
kamadi 2006-08-21 ch 3,	abuseThank you for alerting me to this new chapter: I love it. As for which ending is better...well I like them both but this new one is a bit funnier and (dare I say it) sexier/hotter. Thank you for writing this and mailing me. It was an amazing story!
cronelyne 2006-08-20 ch 3,	abuseWell I absolutely love this one. I was laughing my off at Don's internal dialogue, (oh , he's on my ' . Is he actually followin' me?) That is priceless. I also love how you stressed the concept that these guys are not gay. Not that there is anything wrong with being gay, but these two are a new classification unto themselves. I get exasperated with writers who turn Danny basically into a girl with a **. Make him all whiny and pouty and all that dribble. I much prefer writers who leave them basically straight men who are trying to figure out why the HELL they are attracted to each other. I'm adding you to my favorite authors. Keep writing stories like this one!
valm.csi 2006-08-02 ch 2,	abuseJ'ai adoré! Bravo! C'est drôle, et super bien écrit ;-) J'adore la fin! J'espère qu'il y aura pleins d'autres histoires comme celle-ci!
oddie33325 2006-07-27 ch 2,	abuseit was great loved it but why so short? i want more! lol ;P
kamadi 2006-07-27 ch 2,	abuseSweet story! I liked it. Thank you for writing and posting it.
kamadi 2006-07-26 ch 1,	abuseGreat story, it has a lot of potential, I'm really looking forward towards the next part! Keep writing and posting please.
Wolfsong98 2006-07-25 ch 1,	abuseThis story has caught my attention. Looking forwards to seeing what happens next.
oddie33325 2006-07-25 ch 1,	abuseLOVE THE STORY TELL ME THERES MORE

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