 Lilly-Anne 2009-05-18 . chapter 1 I love this! You really showed Arisa's confusion over loving for the first time. My only other comment is... Write more! |
 Aria-chan09 2008-12-13 . chapter 1CUTE! |
 sakura-fai 2008-03-17 . chapter 1lol, it sounds like her. great job! |
 withering-blackrose 2007-06-22 . chapter 1i love this pairing but people seem to like putting her with kyo hmm i wonder why? anyway i liked the short story it was very poetic and sweet^_^ |
 Talia Blythe 2006-08-03 . chapter 1OMG! Fantastic story!! It almost brought me to tears. |
 P. Fishies 2006-07-26 . chapter 1 Yay! This is very cute and well written for a drabble. :) No one ever writes about these guys, although I'm trying to think of something...
Well done! |
 DesirePassion 2006-07-26 . chapter 1 This was a great oneshot, it was cute.
Arisa was compeletely in character. You did a good job.
I love the Kureno/Arisa pairing. |
 Pebbled Sky 2006-07-26 . chapter 1Adorable. I like how you pointed out the contrast between her "normal" behavior and how she acts around Kureno. Nice story. |
 FlyingFleshEater 2006-07-25 . chapter 1Yeah for UoxKureno! |