I will be honest, worst WoW story i've read on fanfiction, i think you need to make it less corny, your obviously talented and good at writeing, just try not to overdo it next time.

The accent really reminds me of bad guy 1950s haha
Your story is interestting but some of your fascts have to be set straight buddy

Where did u get this accent from? Thats not a blood elf accent! Whats this rubbish about a paladin stone?! It was a naaru that gave them the power to be paladins! Also the first blood elf paladin was some priestess! Please ditch that ridiculous accent its not funny and re read ur story be fore releasing