can't wait to read the rest of the series

I'm glad you wrote this. It was good to see how that night went.

I liked it. Very hot. *smiles*

:D This story was really great! It holds some good emotion, keep up the amazing work!

that was very sweet. It's nice to see Bobby letting his emotions run things for a change...kind of a different take on a drunk loss of inhibitions. I also liked seeing the interactions with and between Logan and Barek as well... a different and warmer side to them revealed.

There is just too much...I've looked at the list of your stories so many times yet I find something new each time, lol. This just made me not like Eames and I don't know why...And Barek, she ticked me off too. She was right, he was totally taken advantage of. I just felt really bad for him...God help if he did remember. Still good though. All turned out for the best. I just felt bad...Gonna go read the other missing scene now...

aww that was so beautiful but yet so sad...great work and yeah...i liked that scene :)

Sassy

Words... I have none. This was a wonderful addition to this story. It played out exactly how I would have expected it to for these characters. Well Done.

That was very sweet. Great idea to expand on Chapter 7 from Choices, which is one of my all time favorite fics. Hot, steamy, sweet and sad all rolled into one. Nice job, as always. :-)

First, kudos to flightRN for requesting this (smart girl!).

You and I have e-mailed about writing love scenes: How much detail/description? When is it too much? etc. I've come to the conclusion that it's not the amount of description of the love acts that determines a good story - it's the quality of the writing. This scene is very well done and you should have had it in the original story all along!

Now, you know, you will be expected to write more ...

Iam so glad you wrote this- i wanted that scene between themtoo- but i didn't want to be greedy- you have given us so much good story- thanks

Wow... wow. Nice. Well, Thak you for writing, and I should thank flightRN too, for asking for it! :D I loved it.

Awesome! I really enjoy these little interludes that you come back and drop in. Great job as always!

I really like these missing scenes and one-shots that you're doing with this series. I like the way you wrote this night in Choices, but it's also fun to be able to take a trip back in this way. And what a trip. Nicely done.

OH man. What a great missing scene from Choices. LOVED it as usual. :)

I have to say you should give yourself a big pat on the back. You write intimacy very well. A lot of the stuff I read on here is either very clinical or sounds like soft porn and yours was neither, you made it sound very natural. I always thought you did a good thing stopping at the line at letting the readers imagine the rest when it came to these scenes, but now I think you are just as good as writing them as you are leaving us something to be desired.

Bravo!