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Bobbius Maximus
2008-06-24
ch 25,
abuseAh, we've come to the climax of our story-the final battle. Grievous and Dooku (Darth Tyrannus) have both been defeated, but what is it that Jaina senses with her grandfather? To find out, we'll just have to stay tuned...
Bobbius Maximus
2008-06-09
ch 24,
abuseOnce more, the struggle for Narnia. What an epic battle this is shaping up to be! The climax to an epic adventure! To see how our defenders of Narnia fare, we'll just have to stay tuned...
TOm Burdett
2008-05-23
ch 20, anon.
abuseIt's agood story so far.I would like to see a power ranger story,I would like it to be the migthy morphin power rangers,I like it to be a Kim and Tommy storyline.
Bobbius Maximus
2008-01-07
ch 23,
abuseOh, the fateful day of battle has arrived! It's now the time when all that's been built up until now comes to a head. Nice comedic touch with the gryphon-bomb on General Grievous, LOL. We're fast approaching the climax, and to see what's in store for our heroes (and their antagonists), we'll just have to stay tuned...
actiongirl179
2008-01-05
ch 23, anon.
abuseYou should continue on with this story. It's awesome, I love it! I read the other two stories and this one in the last week. I love how you wrote that Jadis was alive in the Star Wars galaxy in the second story and how you wrote that the Sith and Padme and Anakin is alive in Narnia in this story, it's kinda neat how you did that. I think that after this story is finished, you should write that oneshot, "Do You Remember" (and turn it into a story) But back to this story, I really want to see how this story ends. Don't leave me hanging. You are doing such a good job, and Bobbius Maximus is doing a good job of encouraging you and giving you some good ideas. I believe you both deserve some credit, which you both arleady have but I'm going to give you some more(hehe). And please UD this story very soon. Please!
Bobbius Maximus
2007-06-03
ch 22,
abuseWell, the climactic battle with the Sith draws nigh, and the question still remains: How will they defeat the Sith? How will our 3 padawan heroes stay out of their clutches? How will the Narnians defeat the stormtroopers? For answers to these, we'll just have to stay tuned...
Bobbius Maximus
2007-04-28
ch 21,
abuseThe Solos and the Narnian Army train on new tactics and weapons in preparation for the upcoming battle with the Sith. As the storm outside rages, the tension builds, and the climactic battle nears. To see what that holds, we'll just have to stay tuned...
JediMan
2007-04-26
ch 21, anon.
abusePretty good, some of the parts are a bit cheesy, but its pretty good.
-JM
Bobbius Maximus
2007-02-28
ch 20,
abuseAh, Padme's reunion with Anakin has led her to her 3 grandchildren, which she now has become aware that she has. The storm continues to rage, and the Narnians still struggle to find ways to defend themselves against the stormtroopers. The climax is fast approaching, and for that, we'll just have to...stay tuned!
Bobbius Maximus
2007-01-29
ch 19,
abuseOh, so Padme's escape was intentional by the Sith, hey? Well, Padme's first problem seems to be finding shelter from the storm. Intriguing, how's Padme gonna react when she discovers Anakin's there in Narnia, with her grandchildren to boot.

For that, and more, we'll just have to stay tuned...
Bobbius Maximus
2007-01-04
ch 18,
abuseNow we get down to business, Padme escapes the clutches of the Sith. While making her escape, she stumbles upon the Sith plans to assault Cair Paravel. Boy does this sound ominous. We'll definitely need to see what happens to our friends here in Narnia.

But to do that, we'll all have to...stay tuned.
Jareth Sparrow
2006-11-28
ch 17,
abuseVery interesting! I love it!
JediMan
2006-11-21
ch 17, anon.
abuseI'm back! I'm so glad you didn't kill off Boba! This is very interesting indeed. I recognized Maul's,Pulpatine's, and Padme's descriptions as soon as they were mentioned. Well done!
-JM
Bobbius Maximus
2006-11-13
ch 17,
abuseOh, wow and fantastic; Susan's birthday has arrived. It's little wonder that our bundle of newly returned joy and energy is anxious to get the festivities started. Fine food, wonderful gifts, and all topped off with banquet that goes well into the night. Susan definitely got the time of her life.

But, the Sith say it will be their last "celebration," so we'd better find out what they're up to, and quick. For that, we'll just have to stay tuned...
Jareth Sparrow
2006-11-09
ch 16,
abuseI think that this ch
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