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Reviews For: Broken

El Burrito
2007-01-05
ch 1,
abuseHey this was great. You captured emotion so well, kept them so in-character and the dialogue was amazing. You're fantastic, and so was this.
Kayce-chan
2006-12-30
ch 1,
abuseLovee it! Nice ending lol!
qwerty
2006-09-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseStark, vivid imagery. Your descriptions are just so beautifully heartwrenching. And you managed to bring in this feel of intense emotion without having them out of character. Loved the ending especially. Here's hoping you'll write more!
Raindog Bride
2006-08-16
ch 1,
abuseI liked this very much. The writing was excellent, for one. "His voice sounded like roadburn" "Live to be ninety-five" WOW. Not to mention Deep Thoughts From Reno, that was pretty amazing. Mostly I was struck by how good the writing was. Another thing I liked was how in character they were, and how you were good enough to play with them a little. *Shivers* I LOVED it, and you are fancy, and feel free to write more. ^__^
Dazzle1
2006-08-14
ch 1,
abuseGlad to see a new oneshot
Reno Spiegel
2006-07-29
ch 1,
abuseOh, Pip, Pip, Pip.

The fandom and I miss you, love, I must say. Gorgeous as usual.
Sienna03
2006-07-29
ch 1,
abuseLovely, as usual. I really must say that the initimacy you create between these two is something that really cannot be emulated. The dialogues and circumstances are great, and so are you. ^^

Anyway, nicely done.
f u r o g u
2006-07-28
ch 1,
abusethat was cute
whoa
update! ♥
Night Beauty
2006-07-28
ch 1,
abuseLoved it. ^^
AngelofMercy86
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abuseHa! Nice fic! I liked the three part thing! Teehee! RenoYuffie!
Anarchy's Ashes
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abuseDeep. You *know* these characters. Incredibly well written.
FuschiaFinn
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abuseVery nicely done. I can't help but wish it was going to be continued but that is the bittersweet thing about oneshots isn't it? Again, very nice.
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