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| randomcat23 2008-08-20 ch 2,  | abuseSeriously, the best Torn/Ashelin fic I've read. Ever. You've captured them perfectly. Thanks so much for the great read! |
| rune 2006-09-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseI lkie it. Please continue. Till next time, See Ya |
| V-chan2k6 2006-07-26 ch 2, | abuseUm. There was another chapter. Silly me. Oh well, this deserves two. Excellent switch from Ashelin's PoV to Torn's. You captured his dry humor expertly. I like how you keep him still a bit irreverent as far as the Guard goes. And the scene on the balcony with Ashelin was just hot. ~_~ So, once again, excellent work. |
| V-chan2k6 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThis made me smile. It was written very gracefully, and you did well in the third-person limited perspective. The fact that this is the one pairing I refuse to comprimise in this fandom doesn't hurt any either. ;) Very well done. |