Yay Jack! I didn't like Jack until "Boom Town," and then I nearly cried when he was gone. Rose/Jack/Nine is my OT3.

Anyway. I very much like this so far. I haven't seen "Doomsday" yet, but I pretty much know what happens (which is why I haven't watched it yet), and I like your take on what happens to Rose. I like the way her thoughts and her life have gone. Nicely done. I particularly like Chapter 1.

YAY! JACK! Great story, UD soon!

This story is ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT... you have written the characerts really well. Please update very, very soon.

Eep! Captain Jack back to save the day! I love it!

Nice fic. Please continue!

Excellent first two chapters and I love that you brought Jack back.

I do hope you'll continue this story.

Please update this!

hello there,

fantastic start! congrats on this being your first Doctor Who fanfic :). Well i thought it was pretty good even if it is Americanized, that doesn't matter though as long as you have it the way you want it and that people will understand.

please continue, i can't wait to see Jack and Rose together again. if Rose does attend her alter-universe father Pete's cocktail party, will Rose invite Jack also? *hopes that this is the same Jack Harkness that we know from the Bad Wolf gamestation*

take care!

Interesting Jack showing up.