WAIT...the other young man is Tobias...isn't it? LOL

Oh, sure pick on ME! What the hecki'm an easy target!

Um, Forlay? Chaptering, pal. Good fic though.

I think it's good. Very possible.

interesting...

I like it. That is all I have to say. :-)

Excellent! Write a sequel!

Awesome, Forlay, awesome. You put us to shame.

That was great. I think it would be cool to have a sequel with all of them at the meeting. I want to see what they all have to say:)

Seeeeequel! Please? I would like very much to read what happens when Rachel joins the group(I wonder who the other people are, LoL)!

Was the other guy in the group, the now-single guy, Tobias? Hmmm... I'd give it a seven or an eight...

*nods* good fanfic! I really like it! It really sounds like something K.A would write..you captured the characters really well

that was good, but Rachel seemed out of character. of course, she is older now and she obiously was changed bye the ending of the war, but still very out of character.

It was definitely differet, but I like it different. Write a sequel!

Oh, pleeeeeeeeaaaaaase do a sequel, Forlay! Loved it!