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| X-treme SR 2008-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseThat was one deeply touching poem. Great work as always. |
| Supreme .S.ta.R. 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuse-sighes- pure romantic poetry. Lovely. |
| Neko Kunoichi Ayaka 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseAww, this is such a cute story! I love how you kept Shadow's character in a way, and Rouge too. It's cool how you made Rouge tease Shadow for a sec, and then not. (something there made no sense, but hopefully you understand that.) I love shadouge romantic stories, and this is one great story. It's one of my favourites. =) Rougie The Bat |
| Digi-Hedgebat-Ninja 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abusegreat poem/story alot if passion in it |
| rougey 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was simply beautiful. Lovely work! |
| dragon off darkness 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseOMG when you said deeply worded i never expected that. I loved that poem it was really really... awsome^^ |
| Ally Nasar 2006-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW that was the sweatest thing ive ever heard!! |
| shadrougeforever 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseWTF? I didn't get the japanese part but still I freakin' love this poem! *faves* Keep it up! |
| Duckroll 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. 99 percent of fandom centered poems suck arse so it's a compliment. Also, don't use foreign languages if you don't understand them completely. Mistranslations are embarassing, and offend speakers of that language. So avoid it unless you have a trusty friend to do the translating for you. If you're self taught(impressive, but rarely enough), or using an online translator, you won't be able to catch the same elegance of the language. Also, you mentioned in your notes that this was computer colored. Colors and different fonts don't appear on Just stick to black. |
| Mystery001 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was a real good poem. Very powerful yet so delicate. |