lol I disagree with you saying that this one wasn't as good as Forbidden Anguish; both were AWESOME. I so love it all. ^O^ Love and Thanks! ~Koya

very nicely written
I love stories like this about the twins.
though the ending was a bit sad
I'm not a fan of the whole Hikaru/Haruhi twist
my guess is, if the twins would really try they would be able to fool her as well. even only for a moment.
Her reasons to distinguish them are almost as ludicrous as Tamakis.
Don't get me wrong. I like haruhi. she just annoys me sometimes.
anyway, keep up the good work
SassandraS

THAT WAS SO SWEEt!
and it was greatly written as well!
thumbs up from me!
AND KAORU WAS SO CUTE!

you're an amazing writer! i loved this story, but i feel so sorry for kaoru! TT lol, anyway, beautiful story

this short fic made my eyes water and heart clench~ >.< awesome weaving of events...very well laid out T.T

OMGosh, I have no idea what to make of this story. I loved it, but the ending was so indecisive. Either it's sad or not ... Ending it with sugar coated depression just leaves readers frustrated. Or at least me. Ohs well, great job. And yes, you're a wonderful writer.

I think you should continue this... maybe hikaru getting rejected from haruhi then going to Kaoru and Kaoru getting angry because he's second choice, imagine the angst!! :D

I liked it. :D By the way, I think that Japanese words such as "Iie" and "Daijoubu" should not be used in a fic written in English... (Don't you think it's lame when Japan-o-philes call everything sugoi and kawaii? XD)

this was so nice...i was so sad for kaoru and first then because happy at the end..lol wonderful work!!

love your story. care to make another one? :3

i find myself liking the thought of the twins being perfect
just as i like your fic

Uwaa! Kore wa tottemo kawaii da yo! Daisuki~! Soshite... eto... Hmm... You should write more. You're very good. And Hitachiincest is always yummy.

Anata no tomodachi,

~Kei

Kyaa!! This is wonderful! Beautiful! I think you're a brilliant writer!