 JoeMerl 12/29/08 . chapter 1This was interesting. If Pokemon are like animals, it could just be dominance; a Pokemon recognizes its trainer as the "alpha," the same basic thing that makes lions obey circus trainers. But then, that wouldn't work for solitary ones. An interesting question... |
 Maliko Wolfen 11/25/08 . chapter 1You have a good point. I never thought about that. Maybe after Charmander evolved, he realized this and that's why he was so rebellious. Hm... |
 ZatchThePikachu 9/1/08 . chapter 1kool,
but i think pokemon instanty accept the fact that theyre not free...but that dosent make sence...
meh,good fic |
 BlackShadowWolf7 11/19/07 . chapter 1hey, i liked that. and i think a pokemon would think these things, including mew. you must've taken time to think this, because it's right on subject. i thank you for these thoughts and if you are, still being a pokemon fan, like me. |
 Damned Lolita 11/9/07 . chapter 1Explanation of why no one can find a Mew, it seems like. Brilliant, as always. However, I have to say this; as for why pokemon obey, part of it is because they have no choice when they are caught, but in time, I believe they will eventually love their trainer. Most, anyways. |
 Dareman 8/16/06 . chapter 1Man, u just luv insulting me and the stories I write read a chapter, and you flame me on them. Read the rest of the stories you read, not just look and not like. Go play in traffic or something! |
 bob 1/29/06 . chapter 1 that was a beautiful poem. it seems so true-to-heart. ;.; |
 Redemmo 10/29/04 . chapter 1another short but nice fic. i usually prefer long stories but your an exeption. |
 psychotic chaos 4/6/04 . chapter 1Poems and 'inner thought' stuff I'm really not used to reading.
But I feel you really make a point with this.
When I first watched pokemon on TV I really didn't get it either.
Very nice insight. |
 Jailbirdy 9/18/03 . chapter 1Interesting. I liked the idea that maybe the trainers killed off those who disobeyed, long ago, and its just a tradition. Of course no trainer would do that now, but thas how traditions work. Interesting. |
 Morbane 2/15/02 . chapter 1Definitely... it's all too easy... for Pokemon to lose their spirits and wills...
You know, maybe you should do a special kind of crossover, the usual "person from Earth enters Pokeworld" except that in your story, the person could discover how monstrous Pokemon training really is.
Just an idea.
Just me hoping for another cool fic from you. |
 deleted account 1/8/02 . chapter 1On a dark note: Imagine being trapped in one of those pokeballs...why Pokemon ever let themselves be around humans, it's a wonder to me...
On a humorous note: If there something wrong with red and white, dear Pokemon, we could change it to hot pink and lime green... |
 Lightning-Strike 12/30/01 . chapter 1You are making me think. That is dangerous. SWEET! I'm actually dwelling on something I read! Very little can make me do that, not unless it is VERY good. KEEP IT UP!
AND WHO CARES ABOUT YOU, ARTICUNO! SHUT YOUR BIG FAT MOUTH UP! |
 Charles RocketBoy 12/19/01 . chapter 1A bit bland, but OK. And let this be a mantra for Pokemon everywhere! Let them unite with Team Rocket and cause lots of blood and destruction in the tradition of Stephen King's "The Night Flier"! |
 Arizima 10/2/01 . chapter 1Good! BTW, it could be the legendary dogs... Always running, try to run away when you meet them so you can't catch them! Or, maybe Eevee, that you can't find any in the wild? :) Anyway, see first word. _ |