Can you be the best person EVER and update this? Pretty please? Cause I keep rereading it over and over on my computer (the one without internet, so I copy/paste my favorite fics for easy reading when I can't get online) and it's so good! This fic and "All for the Taking"/"Winning the War" are some of my favorite fics. Your angst is fabulous. So...be a friend...give an update?
Much love,
scheherazade

I`really love this story and don`t bother to listen to those who say that Casey should hold power! Derek has the power and that`s great! I never tought anyone might like this twisted thing as much as I do and would really dare to put a Fic like this in! AWESOME!! You have gut`s! And please please go on writing, the suspense`s slowly killing me1 Hell I´ve allreade dreamed about this fic ending( and just so you know not just once) So please go on writing! I don´t know if you think I´m crazy, hell I don´t even care. If I knew how to put a story here then pretty much people would be scared thinking I´m insane, but it´s the first time I found a story thats close to mine`s and I really, really look up to you that you really put it up! So would you do me the favour writing on? If I knew you I`d even kneel begging for you to go on with this story! I know I´m doing crazy talk and my review`s gettin as long as book but please, PLEASE; PLEASE! GO ON WRITING THIS STORY1

Why don`t you go on writing this story? I`VE waited for like forever, so pleaase, listen to the recuest of a real fan of yours and don`t end that story here!

rofl, I listened to Kelly Clarkson the entire time I listened to this, it was a rather eerie combo. It reminds me of that horror movie where some little kid sings some kiddy song like Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star, or Mary Had a Little Lamb. The only time it worked was with her slightly darker album. You know, the one with Irvine, the song that makes me write depressing things, *shrug*

Anyways, this was absolutely, horrifyingly disgusting and different in massive degrees to the fluff-with-humour I write. And I loved it endlessly. Because I've never seen anything like it. Dark Dasey fics are usually about murder and obsession, and your's is about this insanely disgusting version of Derek, and how he transforms Casey's personality.

It's hard for me to imagine silly, hyperactive little Mike Seater in this position. S1 Derek... Maybe, if I stretch, but Mike? No. Which is odd, considering they're the same person. Same face. Meh. Weird.

What really creeps me out is that Derek keeps calling her 'sister', and... Jesus Christ, Derek creeps me out in this. Canon!Derek is a puppy, it's odd to invision him as described.

Slut!Casey is amusing, because I find myself thinking she honestly doesn't want to be a slut. Just... Is caught in an odd situation? No. Yeah. She's a slut. x) Fanonly, anyways, until the Truman thing in S4. Though that's not slutty, just annoying.

Props for not giving into temptation (if you had any) and making this hold true to Casey's defenselessness, and Derek's sick, twisted, evil ways. It would've made this predictable and what I like to call a Backspace Fic. In which one backspaces a page in replacement of pressing the back button, because the fic is so predictable, they're too horrified to even put a hand on the mouse.

From what I can tell, this fic isn't finished, and most likely never will, as it hasn't been updated since '07. But I liked it regardless and HELL was it creepy.

~Jo

Great story, ive never scene derek portrayed like this. update soon.

god this was sick. you are incredible!

i like the story but just once i'd like to see her hold at least some power. i mean ur making her totally defenseless i mean i get that she's stuck in this twisted games with derek but come on she cant be totally powerless i mean think of yourself in that place as much as she is caught up in the sick little twisted game she cant b that powerless. if derek love the power he has over her, she has power him because without her he wouldnt have the "hard fucks" that he has with casey i mean i get this is a dark fic but come ur making the female gender seem totally defenseless to a guy. i get thats being vulnerable but really there's a limit to vulanbillity. please continue the fic but can u take in to account the things i said thanx.

woah
digging ur intensity

this is totally amazing :]

Whoa.
Derek would never be that much of a bastard.
But this fic?
Rocks.
iloveitiloveitiloveit

Very sexy and so not cliche :)
Dasey is always a pairing almost every Life With Derek fan anticipates, but never really comes out.
But we can wait, right? ;)

*blinks*

Woof.

Derek is just sick. And evil.

...But for some reason, I find myself drawn to him. He's oddly attractive. And I was planning to review each of the chapters, but this was unlike an other LWD fic here. Almost makes me want to watch the series again. Almost. Anyway. This was my first DFL fic in a lo-ong time. And I was su dissapointed to see that you haven't updated in a while... *is being a hypocrite.

Anyway. I totally preferyour Derek over the caring-I'll-love-you-till-the-end-of-time-let's-have-beautiful-babies-together-and-other-lovery-dovery-shitty Dereks lurking about here. Totally alerting and faving. And if your other fics are as good as this, I think I may just die.

woa that was woa but i love this story its so...yea just love it!

This is so perfect and *hot*. Quite a work of genius.

CLIFFHANGER!! what a powerful good, yet dark story! pleez update and continue! im a fan! :o)