Very nicely done...I know that you wrote this a while back, but I wanted you to know how much I liked it...hence the review. Always enjoy being inside Sheppard's head. Your depiction of Rodney's reactions when Sheppard came around was hysterical as was the last line...totally in keeping with Sheppard's character. Thank you for a good albeit short fic.

Oh, how funny! You sure built up the tension, and then I just burst out laughing at the last line! That is SO Sheppard! Thanks! Becky

Lovely, descriptive writing. Silly Rodney, but the cool gun sounds interesting. Excellent first ficce!

great story!

That was interesting... I'm curious as to what exactly happened, though.

Anything Sheppard whumpage is great in my book. I loved it especially still having his sense of humor even though he's in pain. You so got Ronon right. He would answer that way on the show. Loved the chappie and am hoping to see another one.

Angsty, yet ending on a funny note. I liked it. Do more!