Damn, that sucks. XD Great story, I'd never thought of the saying that way before.

Somehow, I don't think a Legendary Pokemon would threaten like that. The girl with the Cloyster labelling herself as a melody (with a little "m") might. Especially if she possesses a shell that locks up Melody (Pokemon 20: The Movie) so that Ask can't get to Melody because the Cloyster girl labelled herself as Melody. I certainly don't think his beloved island girl, Melody, would leave Ash. But, getting away from the girl with the Cloyster who wants to lock her up so she can't breath in the shell... well, that's completely another disappearing story. As to wrath, I believe that defines Melody quite well (reference: Pokemon 20: The Movie) if this Cloyster girl is running around and telling all of Ash's fans that Melody is the ex and Cloyster girl is next. And, seeing as to the headache that appears in the beginning of this story... I would check what's in Cloyster girl's Palm that would cause Ash to blame a Legendary Pokemon for what I think is Cloyster girl's doing.

I'm off to watch some Beethoven and hope Cloyster girl will leave that little bit of Melody alone. Oh, wait... I forgot, she took that bit of Melody, too.

Were the legendary Pokemon the creators of the human race, to be the ones to destroy them?

This story is beautiful in its simplicity: it doesn't mean to explain it all, but it drives its point home just as well.


And I loved the last line: to be honest, reading the title, I'd not thought about it that way.

It's... beautiful. In a sad way. But that's how it is.

Let me say right now that I never usually right reviews for story, but I'll make an exception for this.

Long has it been since I've read a story quite like this. This was great, 11/10.

Once I was done reading "A Cigarette Moment," I was surprised to find this work from you too. What came more of a surprise was that it was superbly better.

This wasn't expected. I didn't expect the ending and thought that the world had thinned for different reasons. as I read near the center of the fic, I new what you were talking about. And the execution was done very well.

I really did feel for Ash here. Again, this is very well written and much better.

There's nothing left to say other than this helped me see, and probably others too, what's more going on in this world and what the Pokemon feel. And that was because you explained how they gave up hope to have the humans in the world assume the Pokemon had a large passion for fighting (in which some cases, they do).

Then ending was very good and unexpected. I loved it. That's why this fic is going to my Favorites. *Favoritizes*

Well, later.