dear reader,

Hi. i wanted to say that your spelling and grammar is really good. But, what Kagome did- nay, what YOU made Kagome do, was not really LIKE Kagome. But, Your writing style is good. The thing is, I hate to see-read i mean that Kagome would do that. Actually, you are the one that killed the group. but keep up the efforts and make sure the people are in character. Please tell me that Naraku possessed Kagome. PLEASE tell me that.

Sorry, but it was kinda silly.

it's an alright story

oh...my...goodnes...gracious...thats creepy. like, really creepy. i dont know if i could stand another. that was so not inuyasha material. thats just creepy. sorry, btw, for giving so many things! im just bored so im reading stories, but anyway, that was really creepy. i could never imagine kagome doing that...esp to inuyasha and sango and shippo and really everybody! wow, that was creepy...okay, ima be done.

um...well...the idea was good...! But I wouldn't truly call this "dark"...usually "dark" stories kind of..oh how should I say it- if you read something truly "dark" it makes your mood "dark" ,and this..didn't really quite do that. I would say before you try out a sequal(unless you've already made the sequal!) you should try making this longer, using a more serious writing style with a considerably large vocabulary, and just trying to make it have some "gothic aura" about it. But what do I know? not much I can tell you...

That was the best Anime thingy ma bob that I have ever read! Keep up the unnessasary killing!

Damn that was sad *almost cried but not really* it was good.

*sniff* You killed Shippo! *sniff* Oh, well. I think it was rather well written, but... *sniff* You killed Shippo! *sniff* Um... I like Snape. xD

Uhh...I'm sorry to say...I didn't really like it - therefore I don't recommend a sequel. / It's good that you're trying new things, but this story didn't really do it for me. But it's just my opinion. If you want to write a sequel feel free to! Keep it up and I'm sure you'll improve.

Kisshouten