wow...this poem has so much emotion and care put into it that i could seriously feel it!I almost cried. I could tell that you put a lot of work into this...great job!

I really liked this, and normally I hate poetry - it's a given when I'm forced to study three or four new ones every week for my ALevel - but I think you captured a broken heart very well. Good job.

Great job! This poem is so sad and really conveys emotion!

wow, that was really good.
For some reason, my sadistic mind thought 'colin creevey' when i read that.
lawl
that was sad

xoxo
kikii/samantha

Tissue? this is so sad.Its got deep emotion in it. its really great i love your work.
Keep up the good work : )

Oh my god, I just thought of Cho when I read that. I love this one! I felt it, I know I say that about all of your poems, but I always mean it! I love you writing! Yet again, I'm off to read more! ~Shaelyn

wow. you're an amaxing poem writer...I think that would be a poet...anyways, I REALLY like your poems! They're amazing! I wish I could write like that...

the poem was sweet,touching and good.it made me cry.but other than that it was good

Wow that was great

First of all i would like to say thanks for reviewing my poems, it was great to know what you thought and i will change the mistakes tht i made, so thanks for pointing them out!

Now on to your stuff! this poem is fab, sad but fab! i think it is Cho's POV or someone that loved him! it flows really well! love it!
loadsa luv
cammy77
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Hey, this is really good! Sad, very sad, but you write well. I love poetry and there is not enough of it on this site!

This was really creative! I really liked it! Good work!
Blessed be!
~lady k

that was really good!
i almost cried,i loved it!

woah, im not much into poetry and stuff, but that good! you know, if you made a whole bunch like that, but not about death, you could just really publish them, lol, just from reading that, i couldn't tell you it was about Cedric, lol, well, this put my head on a spin, after spending a few hours reading Eragon stuff, lol, cya!