This was really amazing, I've read so long ago, but I was searching old fics of this series and I found this. I truly great! I actually can see this in the book, they all are in character.
Just loved it, thanks for sharing it.

Nice little fill in story to the book. Good read

very good, i love these books. i always wanted a story where her and trent get together,

I don't really like how Ms. Harrison skipped through what I think are important events. When I read this novel, I was a little thrown off by how one minute Rachel collapses, next page, some time had past. Anyway, this is great, your coauthor and you did a good job channeling Rachel. Writing in first person is hard to pull off, most people fail.

I really liked the conversation between Kisten and Rachel. I wish there'd been some more heart-to-heart talking between them before he uh, was written out of the series.

Also, laughing at Ivy's obvious jealously.

A great story! Good job!

*is SO glad to finally find this story* It's SO cute! Well, okay, not quite cute, but it's the best word I can think of at the moment. xD Perfect take on the Ivy / Kisten / Rachel relationship, Jenks hiding in the plant was a great touch, David being there - this is a PERFECT missing scene from book three. Beautiful.