hehehe poor ryoga.. can'T even remember that he have to heal zegaldis... seems he 'slost even in his mind... anyway updatres pls!

from the self-philosopher, talantus

"life is not something granted... you have to be willing to live"

great story. please update.

A good Slayers/Ranma crossover that isn't totally centered on one character CoughRanmaCough becoming God. Nice. Now if only it got updated more...

Ooooooh, this is so good! I can't wait to read more. (You kinda need to work on your spelling, though.)

Where was the part with Goury you were talking about? Uh...I guess it's the next chapter. Ok, just a few nitpicks...You know the "comments" you have after certain peices of dialouge?

Like this-"I HATE BOYS!" Boy, Akane needs some anger management classes.- Ok, was that YOUR opinion? Cause you should never use your opinion. You need to make comments like this the characters opinon or take them out completley. For character comments put them right after something a character says. Or otherwise indicate it's someone else. Do you know what I mean? If not just ask me when you see me next.

Good chapter, Ranma didn't seem like a wuss to me. It's just an overactive Ranma fan. However...if Ranma learns the chestnut fist, he WOULD be able to beat up lina. She wouldn't be able to pull of spells long enough.

Hey everyone specifically Rowan Seven. If you read these I do not intend to have Lina meet young Ryouga. I don't really know where this is going so if everyone likes that idea maybe I'll use it. As I've said in every chapter give me your suggestions they might end up in it. I'm rambling so I'll go. BYEE!

Yay, a new chapter! Once again this story delights, though the time-shift is a little disconcerting. You've got Lina in the beginnings of the Ranma 1/2 series in a time period that occurred before the present Ryouga was brought into a different dimension. Does that mean that past Ryouga will encounter Lina? Anyway, good job so far. I thought that the fights in this chapter were well done, and your writing style is very good and entertaining. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Nice chapters. The battle with the dragon was cool, but it could have used some description. No offense but, your making Ranma look like somewhat of a wimp! Heh, well, I do understand the fireball fear, but just turn it down a couple of notches eh? Well... Great job _

interesting... to say the least... but not my cup of tea. (Oh such cruel fates)

WoW! *claps!* sounds good. can't read any more right now, have to get off. Ja!

Lina Inverse, Enemy To All Who Live

not bad keep on the good work

This is great! Very funny! I'd actually been wanting to do a Ranma/Slayers crossover, but I think I'll wait and see how yours comes out first, so I don't duplicate anything.

Lol! The line about reincarnation and changing religions made me laugh out loud. It's SHUDDER btw, not shutter. Shutters are things you put on your house. Cameras? Huh? Oh and I'd change the name to something original than what the episode really was named in the next chapter.I really liked the dragon scene. I wouldn't change it. and...is Talina going to show up again! She sure looked like a really cool character! _

you might want to mention how Lina got across the ocean. Oh and it's Soun not Soan. Uh..I don't think there is a couch in the Tendo home. LMAO! I love the foot talking though. *sniffle* Ryouga wouldn't break MY arms!

Ok done reading chapter 3. Lina ending up staying at Ranma's house was a tiny bit forced. There needed to be more description too after she jumped out of the tree. I wasn't sure who was doing what. Oh and you do realize that Nabiki hanging around a redheaded boy is going to create the impression of some kind of weird yuri thing right? MWHWHAHAHHAHAHA *hides from pen of enlightenment*

I apologize to anyone else who might read these reviews and the in jokes. _

Done with Chapter 2! Love the Martial arts sign holding thing. Great little add in. The IDS part was pure gold. One little nitpick though, why does Naga just..embrace him? That's kinda weird. Oh and Naga faints at the sight of blood. Seriously.