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| stupid101 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abusei feel so srry for johnny!his dad is so gunna F@#$#ing pay! |
| Greaser Girl 4 Life 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was sad...i hate mr. cade |
| bookwormFFW 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was...intense. I LOVE that song. You're a very talented writer and in my opinion, brave for writing something so intense. Some famous authrors have hard times with subjects like that so great job. |
| Minami Ozaki Wannabe 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abuseVery intensive story...my poor Johnny...but Dally is there for him... |
| Novelity 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseI liked it a lot. However,(don't feel bad I alway have constuctive critizism for evry stry i read, I don't care if its written by shakespear ^_^) the part where johnny's raped seems a little forced. And do i detect an insinuation of romantic feeling blossoming btwn Dally and Johnny? Personally, I feel that it would be a bad idea to slash these two charectors, mainly because their relationship in the book is so defined, but off course that's my personal opinion and has nothing to do with the quality of your work. Like I said, I really like it. Kudos to you. I |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abusebravo you inspired me to write something. You're going on my favorite's list. |
| soda'slover 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad! Poor lil' Johnny! Great story,write another one |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! It was good so sad! |
| Pictures 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abusewow...poor Johnny.. :( Good story though...i give you...umm...two thumbs up! |