So confused right now.
Kate

hey,

I am not sure if I should be creeped out by this or say that I liked it. I usually read Kigo fics and this just dose not go along with my usual readings. lol It was a really good story and the ending was not what I expected. It was awsome. I still can't picture Shego as Kim's daughter without a cringe though. =D

catch ya later
Lexa

Interesting Idea for this story.You carry it off pretty well in general but, with two flaws that hurt .
First-Kim's dads calm acceptance of her and Ron sleeping together after thier first date.So out of charter for him it hurts the story.
Second-That Kim and Ron would have sex after the first date and
unprotected sex at that! Again,so out of charter that it hurts the story.You needed to build it up a bit before just having them jump in bed.Good try tho.

ooh, very cryptic epilogue. I look forward to the sequel.

An excellent premise and good job with the characters. The end felt a little forced and the epilogue was criptic, although I'm sure you did that on purpose. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.

Alex.

Me again. This is really just a continuation of my last message:

Any chance of side stories covering Kim & Kammie's life together?

Kim sweating Kammie in an old-school McDonald's (or KPiverse parallel) playground.

Fun w/ '80's hair & fashions.

Kammie becoming obsessed w/ My Little Pony, Teddy Ruxpin, or that robot-lookin' thing that PreSkool made (I wanted one of those SO BAD in 1986).

Just sound like they'd be fun.

I've been reading this a few times this weekend. It really is a very good story. What I didn't notice until now, though, is the little touches for the sake of historical accuracy. The idea of Club Banana (The Gap) being a regional brand & the Global Wrestling Federation (WWE) still being relatively new in the early '80's were nice touches. It occurs to me that maybe Kim's made a killing in stock options being w/ the store on the ground floor like that.

Nice & Twisted. Where's The Doctor when Ya need him?

That was an incredible story, and now I've got to read the next one. I hope its just as good.

Somehow, I think Kim and Ron are going to have a slightly strained point in the future. Having Shego as a daughter that's older then you will certainly take some getting used to.

The epilogue has left me with some questions, though I'm sure you'll answer them in the next story. Keep up the good work.

I just have to say, I was hooked to this story. I always look for unique ideas, and I definatly found one! Cant wait for the sequal.

I'd say this is a...very original concept to build upon? It's good, is all I'll say, keeping my deeper opinion about this to myself.

The sex on prom thing was, how can I say this...OOC. Very much so actually. In fact most of the problems in the story are just that I don't see it happening. And it gets slightly confusing keeping track of the jumping which happens after every 300 words or so.

It was amusing though, and definitely something I would never think on even touching. Pat yourself on the back.
Revs

Now thats is a original and interesting story. Who would thought of that, quite nice done. Great work ^_^

YAY!! I can't wait to know what happens next. Why was Kim arrested? I can't wait.

Hm. Interesting. I couldn't be sure if Kim was being arrested or if she was watching someone get arrested. Anyway, I thought it was all quite good. And at the end, even if Kim and Ron HAD used condoms, there's still that small chance that it wouldn't work. And that's always something that could happen, even with that. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the sequel. ^_^

*Leaps for joy* a sequel! can't wait! x