very excellent fanfic. I wasn't quite expecting anything as epic or exceptional when I started reading, you really caught me off guard :)

great story so far hope to see more soon!! :x ^-^

yay another chapter up! hm could this lil mage be a summoner.

Nicely done so far. The language of the Elvaan, Japanese. I use it alot in my stories. Its funny to confuse other characters that way. *clicks add story alert button*

(Thanks for posting so quick! /laugh)
Love the angst. Yay for twisted loyalties. Another great chapter... now I just wish I was fluent in Japanese instead of just basics... /sigh

/salute

very intresting =D cant wait for more

OMG! It's been so long since you put this up! I'm glad that you haven't forgotten it. Please do update soon! Can't wait to read more.

I really like it, please continue ^^

^^ oo continue asap its really good
--Marcy (Miroli fenrir server)

60 chapters? Wow, can't wait to read this one. ^_^
~Aboshen, Male Elvaan Warrior 60/Ninja 30 Pandemonium Server

awesome, just awesome. it's the only one chapter but i'm already hooked. i demand more!