very interesting story. naruto and sakura and the rest of the crew are not out of character, at all, and the flow of the story is good. not too fast, not too slow, just right.
i love the determination that burns within naruto and sakura. you characterized them, their inner voices, their personalities and their reactions perfectly.
if it's not too much, i hope you will update soon :)
oh, and also, please keep the sai commentaries going. his unwanted opinions are just so hilarious XD

this is good. update soon

love it!

Wow! I love this! I want to read more so please update soon!

so when can we await a new chapter? I like the storz so far

Aw, that's cute! Great beginning to a story, fantastic writing again. Looking forward to next chapter!

~Michi P.

Huzzah for slugs!

awesome but when is the next chapter going to be put up?

Good story. Please update soon.

nice work man

I really like the start of this story. Heh... I wonder what it is that Sakura had summoned~! Something tells me it's going to be hilarious. Not much Naruto/Sakura interactions, but I can wait! Please update soon! =D

UPDATE QUICKLY! Don't stop at a huge cliffy now! I wanna know what Sakura summoned!

please update fast:) I really like your story

Very nice. Take some time to write - you have a talent for it. Hell don't even do it for this story (though that would be great) but just for yourself, especially if life is keeping you busy - you got to wind down sometimes.

I really enjoyed reading this, thanks.

great ! can't wait for the next