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A good story. I only found one instance where your 'still learning English' stood out -- "ravening lunatics" -- 'ravening' should be 'raving'. My only problem with ths story was it's advertisemnet as a drabble. It isn't a drabble. A drabble is exactly 100 words long. Perhaps you were thinking 'vignette'?

Wow! Fantastic story! For never having written in this fandom before, you did a great job. Please write more!

Jen

What an interesting view that Blair was still dreaming untill he took the step and chose to let his thesis be considered a fake. And only then he does he start to live. MOst interesting and well done, I hope this jumpstarted you because I am enjoying your writing enormously.