Phenomenal story! The idea is very fresh and original. Everything is well thought out and best of all, I couldn't find any glaringly obvious grammatical errors. Keep it up!

interesting idea... keep it going...

Pretty interesting story. Keep it up!

Ignore the first review, some people don't understand that pedophilia wasn't offensive back in the day.

I think it's fine, but I dunno...

I have to see more before I can say it's good or bad...

I'm hoping you continue.

Zhao is a pedophile eww