Well..you've made Kairi out to be a complete bitch :-p At least within Riku's perspective.

At the same time...watching these small notions of body language you're giving..its kinda like Kairi /is/ trying to make Riku jealous - but not the way Riku is believing.

And that last line..this spark that might've occurred is a hint that i'm right on the plots tail!

Its been a wee bit since an update. Hope you have more to offer us :)

Tinuel

MUST... HAVE... MORE!

ARGH CLIFFY! NO MY HEAD WILL EXPLODE!

Very Awesome! Great job, so I hope you continue this soon!

Wow! Go cat, ur on a bread roll hu! See! Told you ya could write better! *hands Cat a bag of poka dotted lizard popcorn* Btw, Ace says Hi.

*GASP* What's going to happen? ! Please! Oh, and yes, this was fast enough for me. And no...I don't know any french whatsoever...Update soon!

What a son of a bitch! :C (To Kairi not to you)

XD Oh god you have no idea how much I love this story, God the whole Kairi Bashing is amazing! XDD I love it! you have to update soon! this story is jst driving inzane! (Cause it's so good! )

Dun dun duun O.O Poor Sora and his ability to not... see things that are right in front of him

i luv dis fanfic!

especially da part when riku was trying to teach sora a more "sophisticated language" lolz...

i REALLY like teh part when rikus all fuck you you bitch! fuck you all the way to hell! to kairi! lolz

Nice story, friendy Friend! It gets the freya stamp of approval! *throws a muffin at Cat*

Fantastic start, I feel so sorry for Riku ;_;

Please update soon!

O. This seems really good! Update soon!

O.O Holy monkies, I need more! I love this so far, Kairi is such a BITCH . *stabs* You leave Sora and Riku alone, you whore ;_;

Continue! Continue pleeaasse! Or I'll diie... x_x