| Reviews for: She Sees Shadows In The Darkness |
 Person 10/16/05 . chapter 1 so... touching... so... sad... personally I think that they lived and returned to earth and also found the time matrix to change things, but I still love your story.
Your Not-Even-Aquaintence
PERSON! |
 Korean Pearl 8/4/04 . chapter 1You already have another ending, which I must say is more satisfactory that this one. Excellent prose, as usual, sad, too, but I still like Kelbrid Chronicles better.
It might have been a good last chapter though, in K.A's books. Although I still like her leaving it open like that so fanfic writers can do whatever they want.
KP |
 mezr87 for short 8/28/01 . chapter 1 ! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL! Loved it, oh my god am I weeping, gotto go blow my nose... *sob* |
 emily 6/22/01 . chapter 1 this was a good fic except...i don't like the ronnie/cassie pairing.
jakecassie 4ever! |
 Flamethrower 6/7/01 . chapter 1ARG! I hate KAA! No author should do that to her readers! How dare she! She doesn't deserve to be the writter for Animorphs! (well, this could all be my temper talking, so ignore maybe some of it. I'm really not a crazy person [or that crazy...]) Just thinking about makes me want to... ARG! Better they all be dead then not giving us an ending at all! I would rather see the worse possible ending then having her just cutting us off like that (not that yours is the worse possible ending.) And also, let us not for get the back cover quote "The exciting CONCLUSION to the best-selling animorphs!" Conclusion? Ha! (can you tell I was really, really, REALLY angry, and still am? lol). Oh, and just for th record, cool "ending" from Cassie's pv. I never liked Ronnie, and I think it's unfair that Cassie be the only one alive, but that's mostly KAA's fault, isn't it? It's more realistic than mine... If it will even upload... *glare at * |
 Akisis 6/6/01 . chapter 1:-( That's saaaaad! I liked it, because it kinda gave the entire Animorphs story Closure, except we all know we'd rather it have gone on, but still, it was good. |
 Ruby 6/6/01 . chapter 1Ah, so I'm not the only one annoyed with the ending to 54, huh? Nicely written, but I want to know what more happens to Cassie. |
 Blue Dragon 6/5/01 . chapter 1okay, just a small missunderstanding, here. for some reason a reader got the impression that Cassie took her own life as well in the end. ? Well, you may think what you want to think, it's an open ending, but that's not the way I thought it. And, then again, on second thought, maybe I like that end better, as well... sigh. |
 Lenalaye 6/5/01 . chapter 1Well, I always think they should all live together or die together. Poor Cassie, she so does belong with them. Hey, maybe you should have her thoughts at the memorial or something. Extend it a little. Till then, NARF! |
 Brian Schack 6/5/01 . chapter 1 This is a small protest against the cover quote. It says "it will end with five", when it should say "it will end with
one". But then again, we don't know what really happens to the crew of "the Rachel", among them Jake, Tobias and
Marco, or what really happened to Ax. It can't end LIKE THAT, it's too sad. Kill 'em all off, so she's rid of them,
can that be KAA's final Ani-idea?
Another problem I noted was that the Animorphs did not begin with six. They began with five if you consider them Animorphs from the point Marco thought of the name. This happened sometime in the Invasion. Ax, the sixth Animorph didn't appear until the Message, long after the Invasion. Therefore, long after the beginning. But it sounds catchy, so who cares. |
 Shivanfire 6/5/01 . chapter 1This was a fantastic fanfic. Well written, adhering to the story mostly... only problem is I can't see Cassie taking her own life. But then again I can't see her falling into depression like Jake either... Oh well. This is really good, Cassie's thoughts are similar to my own fanfic, and I COMPLETELY agree with you about the ending. |
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