This was really nice no dialects just from Nick's POV and it was good. how did you come up with this idea

That was so sweet. Grr, I hate Honda, but still, it matched the story completely. Keep the good work coming, I would appreciate it.
T.S.O.H

Pretty damn good, I must say. Good to see Seto get a mini-heartbreak for once.

Pretty cool, liked the part about:

And I don't think that I'll see her again,
But we shared a moment that will last till the end.

Keep up the good work.

Randy

nice twining of a song and story! Although i personally hold with the opinion that i am the only one in the world who thinks that seto ISIN'T gay OR in love with serenity,tea/anzu (whichever u follow)or mai or isis/ishizu (again whichever u follow) i'm still searchin' for that one (well written) fanfic that introduces a that the cold hearted kaiba will actually fall for. It wouldn't be in a second either it would have to take a while for him to fall for her. Oh well, i'm digressing...anyway nice work on the fic and keep writing! (Oh and if u happen to write/ find the kind of fic that i'm looking for just e-mail me 'k?)

Aw. This story gets me everytime I read it! And I'm touched that you actually used the format I made. XP You are too sweet.

But wow. Cute. I love it. Which means you should SERIOUSLY consider posting that murder mystery story you've been working so dang hard one. Cause I love that one too. =D

Keep up the awesome writing, dudette! I expect to see more from you! ^_^