 Shining Peridot Moon 5/3/07 . chapter 1Luv it! XD |
 RuberDuckling 11/11/06 . chapter 4Oh my gosh...that was SO cool! I like the way Serenity felt Kaiba's pain. Most of the SxS story's I've read Ren's the one in hospital but this makes a nice change! |
 MacarenaNeji 9/11/06 . chapter 4Darnit! a cliffie! lol, Good epilogue! now I gotta wait for a sequel! good story. Cant wait for the next part! |
 Landi McClellan 9/10/06 . chapter 4What! You can't end it like that! What happens to Joey? Does he live? Does he die? Don't leave me hanging, pretty please.
PS-The chapter is great. I wouldn't be getting so worked up if it wasn't. |
 DarkenDepths 8/22/06 . chapter 2"Uh," Seto whinnied trying to open his ice blue eyes.
He whinnied?
How does one whinny?
...I feel sad becuz I don't understand what you're trying to say...
You said hear monitor...
Do you mean heart monitor?
o.O |
 DarkenDepths 8/22/06 . chapter 12007 friary
wut is that? *Points to word above*
I tried to find a picture of the above word but I couldn't...
Is he driving a frier machine or something?
...I think you need some1 to re-read your story to make sure it doesn't have any errors you know?
Consider a beta.
I have to play scramble with some of your words...
So Serenity liked him in the begining?
I don't get it...
Srry... |
 Neo Yume 8/11/06 . chapter 3Hey
Your FF is beautiful!
Update VERY soon!
Bye |
 Landi McClellan 8/10/06 . chapter 3Yayness! All's well that ends well. Good job. |
 MacarenaNeji 8/10/06 . chapter 3Beautiful! Absolutely B-E-A-utiful! A sequel (or epilogue) Would totally be great!
By the way, Thanks for the message! Its a really good idea sending thank you's like that! (am I ending in too many exclamation marks? ok theres a question mark. and a period!)geez,I ate too much chocolate...
Anyway, Awesome story! |
 MacarenaNeji 7/31/06 . chapter 2WAHH! that is such a good story! Keep going! Its beatiful |
 Landi McClellan 7/29/06 . chapter 2Thanks for updating so soon. I think it's cute how they professed their love for each other. Mokuba, of course, is all riled up, but he'll get over it. He always does. Great chappie! |
 helikesitheymikey 7/29/06 . chapter 2 I don't really care about the next chapters length...I just want to see what happens next! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!:) |
 Aperira 7/29/06 . chapter 2NO! Seto's going to die! Wah! I kinda know he's going to die, becaue you called it a fatal accident. In fatal accidents people don't make it out alive. T.T Why, WHY? Stupid Karma. |
 Aperira 7/28/06 . chapter 1NO! Not a damn cliffie! No. This story is good. Waiting to see what happens next! _ |
 Nicholls 7/28/06 . chapter 1Cant wait until you update. Great story too! |